Wednesday 16 March 2016

Writing Explanation - Raptors




Reflection
I was learning to write an explanation to explain about the book Birds of Prey, a book about raptors. I found using technical words easy to do but I found the conclusion tricky because I wasn't sure how to do the conclusion. I found putting it in order a little easy. Extraneous facts weren't necessary for my explanation. Next try I will try not to add extraneous things.
If I didn't like this subject it would be a bit harder to do.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Mikey, I am very proud of how you listened carefully to my instructions and made sure that each paragraph included a topic sentence, explanation and example. This is a really great effort at an explanation.